Hey guys been playing around with a logo of mine, I can't get it to look quite right. Any suggestions?

 

Am I trying to squeeze too much in?

 

This is the most simple version, I will make a more 'styled' version once I've decided the final benchmark.

 

 

i like the bottom one alot,

 

mainly because the crown is ontop of everything else, kind of makes sense.

 

where as the first one is way to spaced out :) goodluck

Its got potential :)

Ever thought about putting the words Royal Designs inside the crown, if you make the crown bigger?

just an idea, not sure if it would look any good though hah

I like the bottom one too. Maybe Reeds design with the crown over the "R" and "Automotive Styling" over Designs.

needs southercross and unit logo?

A styler such as yourself should be able to sort this out ! :P haha nah it looks really good. the only thing that looks strange to me is the font of the 'automotive styling' part. It's just not stylin'...

 

Heres my 1 min effort..

 

 

The crown's a bit bulky for my liking too but hey what do I know I'm only a qualified artist :)

needs southercross and unit logo?

 

This is how I read it whenever I see one of those. At least its convenient that the people on the road to watch out for are labelled as such.

 

 

Back on topic, I liked your second design best. As suggested above, could try it with a smaller crown too.

maybe connect the underlining through the "v" and thin out the crown a little.

Edited March 31, 201115 yr by dzach23

Out of the first two i like the second one. It looks more cleaner and more to the point with the crown on top.

I like the font Oh-KE used on the "Automotive Styling"

 

And Reeds attempt with the unit thing makes me think the girl is farting flowers :hmm: Hows that possible, girls don't fart they bitch to stop the gas from building up.